Below are the links to the last two times I've participated (over a year ago, yikes!):
God flash fiction is extremely difficult, and I think this is exactly what I need to work on that will strengthen my writing.
For this week, we had to do the following:
- Use the below photo
- Incorporate a marriage proposal into our piece
- Word count between 140-160
Here's the photo prompt:
Krak des Chevaliers/Qalat al-Hosn, Syria. CC photo by Jon Martin
~ My Piece (Untitled) ~
The door burst open, vengeance rolling in waves from this woman I loved. I sat up, the box safely tucked away in my pocket, knowing I might not need it after all.
“How could you, Robert?” Her words hung in the air, stabbing me like a knife.
I sighed. “Vic, your life would have been in danger. Now we know - we’re both assassins. What are we going to do about it?”
“You should have told me there was a hit out on me!”
“I never would have gone through with it.” Down on one knee, I opened the velvet box. “And this is why...I love you. Would you do me the honor of becoming my partner in crime?”
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What do you think? Constructive criticism is always appreciated. :) Do you think you'd like to participate in Flash! Fridays, too? Let me know! :)
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